A bit more to distinction

Key Assessment Criteria

F2

F1

P2

P1

C

D

HD

Comment

Content:

Focus of topic

X

Comprehension of theory

X

Application of theory to topic

X

Critical Thinking

X

Refs. used to support argument

x

Communication Objective defined and demonstrated

X

Research Initiatives

X

Structure:

Clarity of expression

X

Grammar/spelling

X

Logical structure

X

Presentation

X

Referencing/citations (in text)

X

Reference List/Bibliography

X

Summary Comment

Clarissa Huay Ching Ngoh

A sound attempt exhibiting high quality work in some areas. The level and quality of your written expression could have been improved by additional proof reading with a specific focus on clarity of expression. Use of additional data to support your argument was well done.

The quality of your research and understanding of theoretical issues was of a good standard. Overall a well-researched, analytical report that included logical recommendations.

Assignment Mark/Grade:

C (high) 72%