HD

Awwww....

So excited at this moment when I received my assignment grade for two HD's !!

HD stand for high distinction!!

However,

we got 10 weekly interactive essay to constitute up 25%.

Thus I just attained a 5 percent now.

My feedback is 

'Your essays are insightful.'

Yeah! Absolutely,

I got most insightful in terms of 'money',

LOL!!!

Vividly recalled back my IELTS exam,

surprisingly I got a band 7.0 for my writing.

I'm awfully surprised for it because from what I knew was you wouldn't get band 7.0 no matter how good you write.

Google appeared that feedback and most people agreed,

even people who got band 8.0, she said her writing is just band 6.5,

and another boy who scored band 7.5, his mother said his writing got band 6.0.

So I'm really surprised about my result,

perhaps,

I can rationale topic about 'money' very well,

LOL! Our IELTS writing paper essay question,

"Do you agree that young people should take over higher positions in a company? Debate your argument."

HAHAHA!

I wrote something about it cannot be denied that older people have wiser experience in the career industry but young people have had to learn to take their accountability in order to make them wiser.

Anyway, 

I had forgot what I wrote,

but I just so surprised I got such a marvellous result for my writing.

Maybe,

journalism student should deserve a better grading in writing and speaking?
Or maybe,

I'm too wise in the sector of money issue?

HAHAHA!!!

So whenever I write about money issue or materialism topic,

I got HD !!!

It meant that essay below I got HD because lecturer said my essay is insightful.

"It is not the consciousness of men that determines their existence, but their social existence that determines their consciousness." I found this statement in my reading about Marx and I was fascinated by it although it's slightly ironically realistic. In term of social production, people have had access into definite relations, which are unrelated to their will, namely relations of production appropriate to a certain stage in the development of their material forces of production. The sum of these relations of production built up the economic structure of society, the real building block, on which emerges a legal and political superstructure and to which meet the clear forms of social consciousness. The production mode of materialism influences the common processes of social, political and intellectual life.

Generally speaking, when people reach a significant extent of materialistic life, we will realize that social existence is a sole factor which stimulates our consciousness instead of consciousness stimulates our existence. In a real life instance, when people move to a societal boundary which all of us live in capitalism, people will try to understand the world in which they live, they contemplate on money such as who has it, how is it acquire and how to spend it worthily. Likewise, people fixate on commodities particularly branded good, trying to grasp how economics serves as a matter to influence us to purchase a product and so on. Technically, we never realized that the act of fetish or materialism is actually top class people exploiting lower class people because we did not witness the facts about economics and society. In most of our days, we only think of the market value of a branded goods or its affordable price. But this monetary value had inevitably led to exploitative economic relationship between factory owners and the workers who produce the goods.