LOL !
LOL !
After an assignment done,
I asked Chin Yean help me proofread my grammar and if anything wrong please highlighted in red words,
so that I know what is going wrong in my essay and next time will be more aware.
I told her that I'm going to take IELTS test in this July,
so I hope that 'better' grammar can pull up my marks (even minimal marks will do).
Usually,
I sent her my assignment (done) then she helped me straight changed my grammar error to the correct words and sent it back to me,
but I found that I learn nothing and I don't know where is my fault,
so this time I told her to let me know where's my mistakes,
so that I can write good grammar during my IELTS test.
Regarding the introduction and the body of the essay,
she changed my grammar error as usual,
until when I read the conclusion,
I can't stop laughing when I saw she cancelled my words and replaced in a positive way.
LOL !
Black words are my words and red words are hers while the red and underline words are she cancelled my words.
*Perhaps I'm too negative!
6) Finally:
Overall,
this ad product is a high involvement trading product and would be
categorised as 'soft sell' product. It is because this ad product is not that
kind of pushy or aggressive direct selling, it lets the consumers decide what
they want to eat by recommending them this ad product, of course, there are
still other products selection if you choose to not have this product of the
ad. Personally, I don't see any evidence of re-branding in this ad as this
product is the latest ad and it is not going to shake off a boring old image
since it is attractive enough. However, I would like to say an
obese is the only particular oppositions who disagree the product ad, because
they are fat enough to reduce taking fast foods. The only negative aspect of this ad is that it
does not promote health consciousness. I would argue this product is not a
healthy meal option, and it would not be beneficial for customers with health
related issues such as obesity. In conclusion, this ad is definitely
working for me as I am in the target demographic.For a further suggestion, a
quality and quantity printing ad is needed in order to spread the advertisement
widely across the globe. We can try to improve the media placement by placing
the ad in the main television channels or even selling promotional coupons through
the social media.
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